11.20.2008

Haiku #1

dry, desert, stinging
begging for fruity relief
where is my chapstick?

2 comments:

Michael said...

Chapstick is a powerful word to use at the end of a haiku. Very unique.

I genuinely thank you for commenting on my blogs and following them these past few days. I sense we will get along well and I'm going to be checking back here to read more.

Nice lookin' out.

Michael.

Rosalie Bass said...

HILARIOUS.

Thanks to my English class, I was beginning to think that all forms of poetry were unimaginative and, well, suckish. This isn't suckish. This is gold right here.